Fic: One Hour With You
Apr. 30th, 2005 10:02 pmI'm not exactly sure what this is. It's what came to mind when given the lines from John Donne's "A Fever"
Yet 'twas of my mind, seizing thee,
Though it in thee cannot persever.
For I had rather owner be,
Of thee one hour, than all else ever.
It was written for![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
memorycharm's Poetry Month Challenge Technically, it's done (and on time!), but I think it's missing something. I also think that I'm not sure what it's missing. If you've any ideas for improvement, etc., feel free to tell me.
One Hour With You
~2500 words
Lily/James with hints of James/Sirius and Sirius/Lily
( For the poetry challenge, some Lily/James, James/Sirius, Sirius/Lily )
Yet 'twas of my mind, seizing thee,
Though it in thee cannot persever.
For I had rather owner be,
Of thee one hour, than all else ever.
It was written for
memorycharm's Poetry Month Challenge Technically, it's done (and on time!), but I think it's missing something. I also think that I'm not sure what it's missing. If you've any ideas for improvement, etc., feel free to tell me.One Hour With You
~2500 words
Lily/James with hints of James/Sirius and Sirius/Lily
( For the poetry challenge, some Lily/James, James/Sirius, Sirius/Lily )